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Better or Worse

March 12, 2015 By Erin Beasley

GlassesWriting for a client is like going to the optometrist. I turn in a draft. They send it back with requested revisions and edits. I revise the copy, return it, and ask, “Better or worse?”

Sometimes it’s better; sometimes it’s worse. I work through the feedback. When I’m told something is “better,” I try to incorporate the tone and style in the next piece. When it’s “worse,” I turn to the existing copy. I try to get it to “better.”

The “worse” copy still has its lessons to share; I learn that better communication with the client is needed. I discover I write too intellectually for a particular audience. The different sections of a white paper don’t cohere.

I change my writing. I get rid of the semicolons. I shorten the sentences. I ask to speak with the client before starting any paper. I seek out subject matter experts. I use outlines. I write down objectives and keywords. I do everything I can to avoid the “worse” diagnosis.

Why? Some of it has to do with self-preservation. I won’t have a job for long if I can’t meet clients’ needs and expectations. The main motivation, though, is found in my belief that the work I do is never just for me or another human being. Each piece of writing I do serves the One who created and loves me and others.

That doesn’t mean I don’t write abysmal failures. I do. Fortunately, He doesn’t write me off when I fail or make a stupid mistake. He holds me close and says, “You’ll do better tomorrow.”

Image: photosteve101 (Creative Commons)

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